Friday 12 March 2021

Favorite Piece Of Clothing

 For the past few weeks, my class was writing about our favorite piece of clothing from our childhood.
My learning intention was using a metaphor, and my sucess criteria was to use a simile and turn that simile into a metaphor.
For our favorite piece of clothing, we first read from a person called 'Maddison' then we followed her template for our own piece of writing. The first paragraph had to described what our favorite piece of clothing looked like. The second paragraph was about what we did with it, what happened with it, and finally, where it is now.
I enjoyed writing about my favorite piece of clothing. My favorite piece of clothing was a purple floral dress. I also enjoyed publishing it on canva. I found picking a background tricky because there were so many options!My digital learning object shows that I can publish my writing on canva.
What's your favorite piece of clothing from your childhood? Tell me in the comments!

9 comments:

  1. Wow interesting im kaynin camile good to meet you

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    1. Thank you for visting my blog, Kaynin!
      Nice to meet you too!
      I hope we can comment on each others blogs next time!
      Mā te wā
      Camille

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  2. Hi Camille its me Rawinia from Owairaka District school. I was very happy when you added a link to your blog on Kaynins blog, I am very happy to see some of your new posts.
    Please check out my blog

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    2. Thanks a lot for visting my blog, Rawinia!
      Thank you for your amazing comment!
      I will definitely make sure I check out your blog sometime!
      Mā te wā
      Camille

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  3. Kia ora Camille
    My name is Aimie i go to St Marys I am in room 1 year 6.
    I really like your poem about your floral Dress.
    Really good
    Maybe you could change the background and match it with dress colour.
    Keeping adding more blog posts Camille.
    Please visit my blog
    here
    Ma te Wa
    Aimie

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    1. Thank you for visting my blog, Aimie!
      Thanks for the nice comment on my piece!
      Also, thanks for the suggestion!
      I will try and visit your blog sometime!
      Mā te wā
      Camille

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  4. hi camile its me rawinia i saw some of your other postes because i really love and inmire your blog hope you visteted my blog byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  5. its in one of my comments

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