For the past few weeks, my class was writing about our favorite piece of clothing from our childhood.
My learning intention was using a metaphor, and my sucess criteria was to use a simile and turn that simile into a metaphor.
For our favorite piece of clothing, we first read from a person called 'Maddison' then we followed her template for our own piece of writing. The first paragraph had to described what our favorite piece of clothing looked like. The second paragraph was about what we did with it, what happened with it, and finally, where it is now.
I enjoyed writing about my favorite piece of clothing. My favorite piece of clothing was a purple floral dress. I also enjoyed publishing it on canva. I found picking a background tricky because there were so many options!My digital learning object shows that I can publish my writing on canva.
What's your favorite piece of clothing from your childhood? Tell me in the comments!
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Friday, 12 March 2021
Favorite Piece Of Clothing
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Wow interesting im kaynin camile good to meet you
ReplyDeleteThank you for visting my blog, Kaynin!
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I hope we can comment on each others blogs next time!
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Camille
Hi Camille its me Rawinia from Owairaka District school. I was very happy when you added a link to your blog on Kaynins blog, I am very happy to see some of your new posts.
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DeleteThanks a lot for visting my blog, Rawinia!
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I will definitely make sure I check out your blog sometime!
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Camille
Kia ora Camille
ReplyDeleteMy name is Aimie i go to St Marys I am in room 1 year 6.
I really like your poem about your floral Dress.
Really good
Maybe you could change the background and match it with dress colour.
Keeping adding more blog posts Camille.
Please visit my blog
here
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Aimie
Thank you for visting my blog, Aimie!
DeleteThanks for the nice comment on my piece!
Also, thanks for the suggestion!
I will try and visit your blog sometime!
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Camille
hi camile its me rawinia i saw some of your other postes because i really love and inmire your blog hope you visteted my blog byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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